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Saturday, May 26, 2012

Joyful Haiku

Bright sunny morning
she comes and smile, momma
hello joyful new day.
 

Chirping birds, their songs 
brewing coffee and my friends
a joyful evening.


(I would Like to thank my friend, Tarun Mazumdar for teaching me this art so patiently and helping me with this one.)


21 comments:

  1. Thank you so much Jaskiran... Beautiful thoughts and a refreshing set..

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  2. Quite beautiful. :) Good to see new faces at Haiku Heights.. thank you.

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  3. this is indeed a joyous start... good luck :)

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  4. Lovely artwork...made me want to be more of a morning person, too

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    1. Its great to know that... thank you for the appreciation

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  5. lovely haiku ~ 'mama' delightful line ~ lovely art work ~ ^_^

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    1. Thanks a ton.. it indeed is lovely to see her smile.. :)

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  6. everything you list is very joyful

    valued benevolence haiku

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  7. Jaskiran this is really a nice set of haiku ... I understand that this is one of your first haiku. I am glad you have found this wonderful poetry form. Welcome at Haiku Heights.

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    1. Thank you so much for this warm welcome and appreciation

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  8. Beautiful set Jaskiran... Welcome to the haiku world! :)
    Do and think not.. Think, then do!

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  9. Awesome debut!, great that Tarun introduced it to you,. welcome to HH family!

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    1. Thanks Jaideep! and thanks for the warm welcome

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  10. Haiku makes you get hooked.. I used to write long long poems on my blog..and then Leo guided for Haiku when I tried to write at HH.. oh , I got Haikued.. and you may too.. it's such fun..welcomed..

    You have done well here..thanks.. RS:)

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    1. Thank You Sir... yes i hope to get Haikued... i think I am on my way.

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