Total Pageviews

Saturday, October 6, 2012

Two lonely friends


Oh! The king of the night sky
You seem lonely,
Aloof without your companions
The swarm of clouds.
Just the way you drift away in a gentle sway
My lonely heart too,
Tonight swiftly flows
To the tune of a loner’s heart
Sitting alone wondering
That we both are alone, but together in this hour
So while you hover in the sky
Accompany me to write some lines
For you are my friend tonight
And we shall not leave each other’s side
In this lonely plight.  

6 comments:

  1. It's an ode to the moon, with a more than perfect title. Your words, like most of the times, are mesmerising,keen to make it a visualisation.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Nicely written...the moon sure is friend to a lot of people out there!!

    ReplyDelete
  3. great theme and ending here. Also, can't tell you how nice of a surprise it was, after reading all night, the font here was amazing to find. Hover in the sky, heart…swiftly flows, drift away in a gentle sway-great movement and mood created here. Excellent write. Thanks

    ReplyDelete
  4. "Love the one you're with" (song) -- and if she happens to be the Moon, well, what more loyal lover can there be. Nicely done! Fun image choice.

    ReplyDelete
  5. smiles....when the moon is your only companion, enjoy her....let her fuel the words in your pen...she has been the companion of many a writer...

    ReplyDelete
  6. The moon and I have shared a few moments as well! She's a great listener...

    ReplyDelete