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Monday, May 28, 2012

In Love With Life


A  Marooned meadow
Freeflying butterflies
The sun radiates
In its brightest light
With surprisingly soothing flurry
And sparkling gemstones
That decorate the prairie
We hurry
And play the secret game that we play

In love with life I am

The sound of pouring water
A freeflowing cascade
And we sit gazing at the edge
Listening silently the story unsaid
Our hearts set a conversation in nature’s refuge

In love with life I am

Moonlit sky
Sparkling chimes raying the heavenly light
You and I side by side
Accomapnying us is some exotic wine
And you whisper
‘I want to make you mine’

I say
In Love with Life I am.  


For http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.in/
Prompt 222: In Love with Life

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14 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 28, 2012 at 10:14 AM

    This is lovely, a soothing composition. Very well-written!

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  2. Tarun MazumdarMay 28, 2012 at 10:24 AM

    and you said this is not your day.. hey poet just look what you crafted... it is just the way it is supposed to be...

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  3. JaskirancanvasMay 28, 2012 at 10:35 AM

    thank you for this sweet motivation

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  4. The Write GirlMay 28, 2012 at 7:47 PM

    That is so beautiful. You've taken us on such a romantic ride with your verse. Enjoyed the read!

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  5. Manan GuptaMay 29, 2012 at 12:25 AM

    Beautiful.. :) Super like!

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  6. Harshad MehtaMay 29, 2012 at 1:36 AM

    Beautiful rendering.

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  7. Bruce MillerMay 29, 2012 at 11:36 AM

    Like a modern Omar Khayyam!!

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  8. Sankara Jayanth SMay 30, 2012 at 4:30 AM

    "Our hearts set a conversation in nature’s refuge", simply the best line for me. The lines preceding and succeeding that made it even better.
    A beautiful poem.

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    1. JaskirancanvasMay 30, 2012 at 7:24 AM

      Thanks Jayanth for this generous comment of yours.. :)

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