a visual treat! great haiku.. the second line is pure magic..
Thanks tarun :)
Nicely written haiku :-)
I have a deep purple clematis just blooming, and I read the verse to it....nice work
Thats so sweet Joanne... and thank you :)
Wow... this one's a vibrant haiku :)Quest of the unknown.
Thanks Pranita :)
Very vibrant indeed.. I like what you tell with the haiku, however perhaps the last line, "Clematis for you" sounds out of place... maybe something like, "A lone clematis" or "Pretty clematis" something like that?
Thanks for the suggestion Leo... it can very well be that...
Image crystal clear,.very poetic!
Thank you jaideep :)
Nice one :)
Very beautifully crafted haiku.. heartfelt!
Its really nice haiku ~~
a visual treat! great haiku.. the second line is pure magic..
ReplyDeleteThanks tarun :)
DeleteNicely written haiku :-)
ReplyDeleteI have a deep purple clematis just blooming, and I read the verse to it....nice work
ReplyDeleteThats so sweet Joanne... and thank you :)
DeleteWow... this one's a vibrant haiku :)
ReplyDeleteQuest of the unknown.
Thanks Pranita :)
DeleteVery vibrant indeed.. I like what you tell with the haiku, however perhaps the last line, "Clematis for you" sounds out of place... maybe something like, "A lone clematis" or "Pretty clematis" something like that?
ReplyDeleteThanks for the suggestion Leo... it can very well be that...
DeleteImage crystal clear,.very poetic!
ReplyDeleteThank you jaideep :)
DeleteNice one :)
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully crafted haiku.. heartfelt!
ReplyDeleteIts really nice haiku ~~
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