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Sunday, July 1, 2012

True Haiku


Scorching sun, burnt me
Clouds arrive, respite in store
That’s my heart bleeding.


For prompt: True 
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6 comments:

  1. PranitaJuly 1, 2012 at 10:43 PM

    Your haiku kinda literally describes my present state... just migrated frm Delhi to south.. heat to clouds! But my heart is singing ;)
    Bloom under the moonshine

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  2. GraceJuly 2, 2012 at 5:19 AM

    Nice share ~ I like the scorching sun ~

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 2, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    We all need a respite now and then.


    Walking True

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  4. Tarun MazumdarJuly 3, 2012 at 12:19 AM

    A storm inside this haiku and your thoughts....

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  5. Amrit SinhaJuly 4, 2012 at 1:14 PM

    Burning and bleeding .. passionate and intense !!!

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  6. NAWALJuly 5, 2012 at 10:29 AM

    really intense haiku.. the pressure from out ut calmness inside may help us to keep going well crafted haiku :)

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