'watching the moon swim' - what an apt image, it does seem to swim behind the clouds....
I also really liked "watching the moon swim"...the silence of the moon diving through clouds leaves my mind breathless...
you are the best nature poet i know... there is no one like you.... I am proud of you poet...
Beautiful words, wonderful meaning!
Moon dives in clouds.. Vivid imagination.. I can visualize it all. Beautifully-written.
beautiful visuals in this...the moon being full it is so large as well right now...
nice..love the image of a swimming moon..
Exquisite haiku with lovely details. Nicely done.
Beauty in brevity! Well done!
'watching the moon swim' - what an apt image, it does seem to swim behind the clouds....
ReplyDeleteI also really liked "watching the moon swim"...the silence of the moon diving through clouds leaves my mind breathless...
ReplyDeleteyou are the best nature poet i know... there is no one like you.... I am proud of you poet...
ReplyDeleteyou are the best nature poet i know... there is no one like you.... I am proud of you poet...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, wonderful meaning!
ReplyDeleteMoon dives in clouds.. Vivid imagination.. I can visualize it all. Beautifully-written.
ReplyDeletebeautiful visuals in this...the moon being full it is so large as well right now...
ReplyDeletenice..love the image of a swimming moon..
ReplyDeleteExquisite haiku with lovely details. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteBeauty in brevity! Well done!
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